Feb 14,2012
Intermadte 1\Writing\Reading
New York City.
I have ever visited NEW York city 6 manoths ago .
First, the NEW YORK city it has many high buliding, such as Rule the World Trade Center in
NEW YORK.
NEW York also it has some famous Street ,such as Time Squaer and Fifth AVenue.
Also it has a lot of designer shopping ,and crowded people. In the front of time
Square Street you can see alot of people walking and shopping. Behind this Street it is FIFth Avnue
ST. This is area it called Menhantin nxet to China Twon it is beautfil place, and the sounds it was noisy.
The Street looks like dirty and bad smells , such as the Garbage .When you across Time Square ST.
You can see a Public Library between the library and some blocks Empire building. It was
famous building in New York city. In the back of this Street it has Park National the biggest park
in New York and smells flowers. You can ride the corral, and take tour around the park.
ALso I went to the Sea it was tides, and clear water. I took tour sightseeing by the ship
The Sea it was salty water, and the weather it was between clodly and sauny .
In shoret, New York is beautiful city and unique in the world.
Please check you spelling and your capital letters. You must do this before I can change your grade.
ReplyDeleteThank you
Carol